I stopped a while
as a piece of ground
remaining without water
violated in a field
Who are the people loved me
And those who have killed
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This feels like my life…I’m glad you’re clear to see whether good or bad
yes, David, more or less we all pass through these kind of feelings 😦
It’s good when we are aware about this – and accept letting come what is coming, and letting go what is going…:-)
Yes that’s the key i think understanding the natural ebb and flow of life and riding the waves as they come:)
wow…. i very much identify with the gripping emotive in this one. very nice mirela.
Really? Yes, some emotions are international 🙂 Thank you Don.
what a welcome to your work…this resonates with me and where I am in life now
What a nice comment. I really appreciate. Yes, it happens that some feelings and emotions can not be exclusive… I am glad you find yourself in my poem 🙂
I hope there will be more and thank you for following my blog.
Very strong and moving. Powerful.
Happy to see you here. Thank you Nae.
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